Guilty

Understand?
Why, why, why?
Compulsion and anxiety
So guilty
My illogical actions
Don’t make sense!

Fear, anxiety, I can’t sleep
Enemies of mine
Depressed and guilty
Aching disappointment
Please, please make it stop!

This shouldn’t be!
I don’t want to be
So worried, so obsessed
This awful compulsion!
God, please God!

Struggling!
So guilty!
Sobbing, retching!!
I swallow, I breathe
The numbness returns

Reviews

[A.E. Surdam]

Very interesting. I enjoyed reading it.

[Allie :)]

There are simply too many adjectives, and though there is plenty of brains in this, but I can't help thinking that it doesn't make much sense...?

[Kathryn]

again, brilliantly written. Fabulous emorive language, and just as dark as your other works. well done :)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i can relate to this a lot, i think we all can. its a common subject to write about, but you brought it new life with your talent for words.

[State of Grace]

I can completely relate to this. Awesome job :)

[raindroplove]

:)

[Alskar]

Oof! I can relate to this so strongly. Great sense of confusion, anxiety, and drama here, descending back into stillness at the end. Strong, savvy writing.

[DearSweetAgony]

WOW
I LOVE THIS!
Great Job!