Left

As I lie down

The memory

Of us kissing

Comes into my mind

Every waking moment

Is a living Nightmare

That memory

Haunts me

As I go to fall asleep

I see you next to me

Cuddled next to me

On the old porch swing

Yet you have left

I remember  you

All the memories

Wont go away

As I listen to my friends

They tell me im crazy

For holding on

For as long as I have

I loved you

You were my baby girl

I was your teddy bear

Yet you already left

Reviews

[soulsearching]

Good read!

[nishantshah2381]

good read ............ like the way u potrayed ur thoughts

[☯]

I think everyone can have a little relation with this. It's a sad part of life where ou keep wanting to believe. Very nice and adorable. :)

[A.E. Surdam]

:) > :( This is touching and very sad at the same time. I adore it. Truly I do. Yet I feel the raw emotion within the lines. It remembering a relationship that turned from butterflies to sour in the mouth. Very nice.

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

A pattern in all these... I can say you need to get over her.. It makes for good poems. but you can do better and need to move on so you can live your life, bro.

[TheUnforgivinFallenAnge..]

Thank you everyone for the great reviews. I would ave never thought that my poetry would really speak out like you guys say.. Thank you

[Katannaism]

I can totally relate to this-just switch the gender. :p
But this is really good. I can feel the nostalgia just whiffing off this piece! A few ellipses would do this justice. But an exquisite piece full of emotion! Loved reading this very much. Well done!

[DearSweetAgony]

Wow
I'm not a big fan of love poems but this is an exception.
I love the feeling in this incredible write.
Great Job!

[Murisaka]

more than likely someone I do not know of your friends.... but still touching man...

[Sylo's Rose]

Jamie you need to let go of her. She aint coming back. I know you want er to but shes not sorry to tell you. But its very good. Very good. very emotional and depressive. It made sylo cry.

p.s from sy sy
you jerk off you made me cry!!!!!!!!