MMMmm

Poem to make you go MMM

The softness of your skin, the firmness of your flesh,

The sweetness of your juice, as it drips down my chin.

 

The blush of your cheek, the curve of your shape

They all together serve, to make my knees go weak.

 

No other will do, No other do I want

Oh Georgia Peaches, how I love you.

 

 

((What?...you thought it was about something else?...you naughty people!))

Reviews

[Justaguy]

LOL!! Yes, I admit it. My mind was in the gutter until the last line...lol Awesome!

[Adam E. Guerra]

....i was listening to nine inch nails "Closer" when i read this. wow. I think i am in love with georgia peaches.

[Alicante lullaby]

funny..

hahahahahaha

[MiidniightSoul]

Haha this one was awesome. I totally love reading all of your stuff, they are all so well written.

[Carolina Kel]

That is awesome! I was wondering why there was no mature warning, but it became oh so clear. :)

[Tea And A Cheshire Smil..]

Aha, I love this one :) The twist at the end is brilliant ^^ and, I must admit, I honestly did think it was about something else

[Roslyn Beth]

LOL! That was very good and okay I admit I thought it was about something else.

[Donna M. Burr]

LoL. I loved this. I love poems which always seem to be talking about something else, and speak in a way which gives the readers something already envisioned in their mind. It is similar to irony I guess, and I love irony. :3