Strawberry Wine

Strawberry Wine

A Poem by Suicide Squad Girl♥

With every kiss and every little touch

it all makes me love you oh-so-much.

We could kiss all throughout the night

we could love until the morning light.

 

Your kisses are so breathtakingly good

I would show you what I mean if I could.

Our love knows no bounds in our world,

let's let ourselves go and let our love unfurl.

 

When you kiss me it takes my breath away,

I'd die just to get your kisses one more day.

But as soon as we part I can no longer breathe,

I guess I was too blinded by love and too naive.

 

Now I'm left with no air and I can't survive alone,

I've tested the waters now I've got nowhere to roam.

I think I'll take a break from this thing you call love,

and they say it's a blessing sent from Heaven above.

 

Pfft.

© 2013 Suicide Squad Girl♥


Author's Note

Suicide Squad Girl♥
Back in 11th grade, my HONORS English teacher, Ms. Deidre Wood sang us the song "Strawberry Wine" and explained to us how the song expressed love being 'bittersweet'. That song, and her talk with us inspired me to write this poem.. hope y'all enjoy it! :)

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The last line in the second verse was too Eminem for me to get past. Either he popularized it to a point where I can't hear anything but his voice in it or it an homage to his work, let's let our love unfurl is word for word transcribed from that song. Anyway, outside of that, thanks for the work

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on December 30, 2013
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