Rocking Moon

Rocking Moon

A Poem by TheStubbornPen
"

For everyone who has to grow old.

"

Grandma is rocking in her chair,

like a goddess on the crescent moon

sprinkling down Autumn

for a harvest.

 

And he comes;

with October in one hand

and a pocket watch in the other.

"I'm early," he says

and sets his hat on the coffee table.

The Universe is hiding inside his fedora

 but Grandma is careful not to look.

 

"The kettle is on the stove,"

she tells him  from her rocking moon,

"if you'd like a quick cup." 

The gray-white wisps of her hair

wrap up the stars of the window behind her

into beds of cumulonimbus.

 

He folds up Grandma in his eyes,

 a shade just darker than Forever,

and holds her there

like she hasn't been held in years:

With a warm, patient love

that understands the inconvenience of age,

and gives up the egoism of beauty

to get the names of every laugh and tear or shout

that carved those "ugly" wrinkles

into her face.

 

When he moves across the carpet,

kicking up the dust of  mountains

and the sand of deserts,

he goes slowly

because, really, he's older than she is.

 

Long fingered artists

at the end of his arms,

pick up the teapot.

They are calloused and burned,

with black and silver comet flakes

trapped under the fingernails,

because he works nine hours a day

reshaping creation

so that it still fits into it's cradle.

 

He pours two cups

and flavors them with the breeze of his breath.

Grandma sips the tea from underneath the reflection

of his handsome face and asks

"Is there time?"

He answers,

"If there isn't, I'll make a little extra."

 

A skein of black wool in Grandma's lap,

pierced with silver needles,

weighs her down with the graceful lump of an unfinished sock.

Isn't that like life? she thinks.

Unfinished Socks.  

 

They drink together

and listen to the silence of a king sized mattress

 that is always cold on one side

and a patient telephone

 that rings once a week  on Fridays at two-thirty.

Outside the mailbox stands sentinel at the end

of the driveway. Empty mouth wide open,

like a scream, or a challenge;

an argument, that the postman gave up on long ago.

And the rose bushes, which don't bloom anymore,

stand at the mailbox's back.

 

"I'm done." Grandma's voice is

crackled leaves and knuckles,

Fall wind.

She puts her feet flat against the rug

and stops the moon from rocking.

 

He stands up and puts his hat back on

so the Universe trickles around his ears

like a busted egg.

Grandma smiles toothlessly at him

when he embraces her out of the world.

He makes her all the promises she's heard before

and puts her to sleep in the brim of his fedora.

 

He leaves her bag of bones

and the empty tea cups

behind.

 

At two thirty the phone yells itself hoarse

and feels rejected when the dead don't answer.

The bed turns over, cold.

The roses gave up the summer no one came to trim.

The mailbox keeps shouting though,

having no way of knowing what has happened

inside.

 

Grandma's children come.

They don't have the presence of mind to wonder

whom she was having tea with.  

And the cups catch the salty water

of their hysteria;

which only proves that they didn't understand her.

He'll come back for that later,

use it to refill the sea.

© 2010 TheStubbornPen


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
KL
I've never read anything like this. You told a story here, effortlessly weaving poetics and narrative into one shining flowing piece. You have so many memorable lines and images that it's impossible to pick out one. This is going in my library so I can read it again... I think there's multiple angles to interpret this from. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

Is it made of cheese? haha yeah right more like freezing cold rock with giant holes! lol! I like this it's a sense of freedom nice job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


dark i love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very chilling and spooky. Masterpiece!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a great piece. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. The words flowed so great.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A captivating piece. Very nice images. I really loved the second and ninth stanza... Don't know why...just do....

Posted 14 Years Ago


When it is my time... I hope I get to enjoy a cup of tea with Him also.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great story. The use of allegory wasn't forced in the least and the life lessons are palpable. Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


wonderful writing ~ pace , flow , the images , all expressed with sentiment

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow...If this poem doesn't tear away at your heart...
You just simply arent human. You brought back many
memories in my mind. Thank you very much for this.
Loved it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
.
wow ..I am speechless..that was enchanting, intelligent, fasinating...unique and soooo beautifully written ..I am humbled to have read this wonderful piece on the cafe...I am saving as a favorite..and coming back for more...

Posted 14 Years Ago



3
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

1130 Views
31 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 10 Libraries
Added on July 8, 2010
Last Updated on July 8, 2010
Tags: age, death, God

Author

TheStubbornPen
TheStubbornPen

About
For all you know I could be an extra-terrestrial. more..

Writing
Smile Smile

A Poem by TheStubbornPen



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


My Shoes My Shoes

A Poem by .


Define Love Define Love

A Poem by .


Soul Food Soul Food

A Poem by .


Mother Earth Mother Earth

A Poem by .


The Saints The Saints

A Poem by .