You

You

A Poem by Molly

 

Seeing you, it doesn’t kill me.

Hearing you still makes me smile.

Learning more about you thrills me,

understanding your artistic style.

Sharing with you all things new,

figuring out your bemused thought,

comprehending the shifting hue,

watching as each bright shade fought.

 

The color of your name has dimmed,

the letters comprising it grown smaller;

now my idea-you is only skimmed

and your name inside’s no longer hollered

with exuberance and jubilation;

instead, it’s dropped, as if in passing.

Oh love dimmed by blown expectation,

snared by dark thoughts that are massing,

why, good sir, your change of heart?

Why on earth’d you change your mind?

I’d rather you said at the start

you were not wanting to be mine.

 

Do you sense the problem here?

Much as I’d love to say I’m fine

I cannot stand to have you near

for just a little bit more time.

I want to break you, yell and scream,

but touching you could cause me pain;

these thought should remain just dreams,

not acted upon, leave soul unstained.

 

So pardon my mild craziness,

but it is YOU who causes my distress.

© 2008 Molly


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

I have one of these..brilliant..how I loved to exchange ides and listen to him he was so brilliant..Fortunately he has been gone years now..As we tried to be friends I had to eliminate that as he was so cruel at times..
You have caught something universal and very intimate here..what wonderful piece!

Posted 16 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

Molly, thank you. It's such a relief to know that I am not alone in my feelings and how to work through them. I have been in the situation you describe, and know that I'm heading for that same situation again. I'm scared about the feelings, although I know I can get through them, because I have before. Your poem is an inspiration, because I can look at those words, know I'm not alone and draw strength from that.

thank you

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Aww, much thanks for the review! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

it couldn't have ended better
very descriptive
excellent work

i loved this part
The color of your name has dimmed,

the letters comprising it grown smaller;

now my idea-you is only skimmed

and your name inside's no longer hollered


Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


6
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

24363 Views
53 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 16 Libraries
Added on February 13, 2008

Author

Molly
Molly

About
I write to write. Not for you. Not even for me sometimes. Inspiration just hits me, and I'll write it down. Sometimes what I write concerns the present, people I know or things I've seen. And other t.. more..

Writing
Speeches Speeches

A Poem by Molly


Length & Force Length & Force

A Poem by Molly


Sleep Sleep

A Poem by Molly



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


seduced seduced

A Poem by Emily B


Overture Overture

A Chapter by Scott Free