Anger

Anger

A Poem by Molly

 

It’s an old beat,

You played it.

Played it, okayed it,

In my own house even, you sick F**K!!

And you justify it how?

It’s always been like this.

 

And?

 

Well f**k that.

And f**k you!

I’ll do whatever the hell I want to.

Stoppin’ me won’t happen,

So back the f**k off.

I’m on my own now.

 

So deal.

© 2008 Molly


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This is interesting. You definitely used the word "f**k" way too often. I believe it has a lot of anger and passion in it, but it could be expressed differently with less vulgar language. Overall it was OK. Keep writing.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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