Jack and Friends' Adventures: The Initiation

Note: Anything about a character that wasn’t explained will be explained later in the book “Jack and Friends Adventures”.
1. What is your favorite part and why?
2. Who is your favorite character and why?
3. Was there any part of the story that felt boring and/or wasn’t that interesting?
4. Do you feel like you understand the area (not world) that the characters are living in?
5. Was there any thing that happened in the story that didn’t make sense to you besides characters hiding their identity?
6. Did you run into any grammar mistakes outside of character dialogue? If so estimate how many? About 1 to 5? 5 to 10? 10-20?
7. Did you ever feel like there was too much going on at once and/or that the story was moving too fast?
8. Are there too many characters to keep up with?
9. How badly do you want to read the rest of the story?
10. Overall thoughts?