Dying Inside

Laura's Point of View 

He did it again.  This time it was really bad. I have bruises all over and I don't know what to do. I am sitting in my room, crying. I am such a loser. Why can't I be a better person so he actually accepts me? I'm so stupid! I mean he said he loved me and everything and I still screw up! I'm so stupid. 
"Honey?" my mom said from the door, I quickly pulled my bed covers over me, to hide the bruises. 
"What?" I said. 
"Sweetie, do you want to eat something? What's wrong? Is it Jared again?" 
"Mom! I'm not hungry, I just want to sleep. And nothing is wrong. I did have a fight with Jared but it was my fault and now we are back together."
"Honey, he isn't good for you. You're sad so much."
"But, that is because I do the stupidest things sometimes. And I'm not sad a lot. He is amazing! Don't say anything bad about him. I love him."
"Fine honey, I'll see you in the morning. Goodnight." My mom said, closing the door.
I opened my cell phone, I had five texts. All from Jared. I called him quickly; he got mad when I didn't answer his calls. 
"What?" Jared said, sounding mad.
"I'm sorry, my mom was here." I said.
"More f*****g excuse. Can't you do anything else?" 
"I'm sorry Jared." 
"Fine b***h, get your a*s over here." 
"Now?"
"No, five years from now!" 
"Fine, I'll be there in ten." 
I heard the phone click shut.
I closed my cell phone and quickly got ready. 
I soon arrived at Jared's back door. I tapped on his door lightly.
He opened the door almost immediately. 
"Heyyy," he said a bottle in his hand. 
"Jared, are you drunk again?" 
"What the hell are you, my mom?" 
"Sorry Jared," I said, moving my face up to kiss him. 
Instead of a kiss, his hand slapped my cheek.   
"You're late!" 
"Jared! I am like three minute late!" 
"You're late!" 
"Sorry," 
"B***h,"
"Sorry,"
"Fine." 
All of a sudden, Jared's face went soft. He reached down a pushed my hair to the side and started kissing my cheek, which still stung. 
"I'm sorry," Jared said. 
"It's alright," I said, wrapping my arms around him.
"I love you Lilly, don't ever leave me." 
"I won't Jerry," 
"You always have to be with me," 
"I love you too," 
"You better, because if I find out you don't I'll kill you."
"I'll always love you," I said, trying to keep my voice from shaking.
"Come upstairs, Lilly, I want to see all of you."
"Fine Jerry," I said, following him upstairs, to another night of dealing.

Reviews

[HPsGurl1]

Nice work! It totally captured Laura's view on things and makes the reader wonder whether or not Jared is even sane, given the previous chapter.

[La3uren]

confused is jerry his nickname? well writen :)

[Loner]

THis was a journey in its self a pleasant read.

[Amber-The-Panda]

I liked it but the only thing I was confused about was the fact that in the end she called him Jerry and not Jared.

[xlunalovex]

Wow another intense chapter! Loving it!