Are You?

I write and wonder
are you reading this
do you read it as i write
do you whisper the words
in my ears to place on paper

Are you reading this
does it even matter
i send emails to you still
i can't stop talking to you
my heart still feels you near

As you sit in heaven
do you read the emails I send
can you feel the words that flow
somehow I think you do see
I wish you could respond

Do you know how much I miss you
Are you feeling my aches
are you missing me as I miss you
Are you reading this poem
are you there?

Reviews

[curiocity]

He really did love you and He desperately missed you. But now life truly is for the living, and it does go on.

[Seamstress]

I know that now, but it took some truth coming out to really understand it all. I have always really loved him and there are moments when I still desperately miss him *tears up*.

[Hailey Shay]

Very profound and emotional, I appreciate your honesty in this piece. Great Job. I hope that writing this piece of poetry gave you a release and continues to heal the wound that was/is there. Best wishes

[Sourav]

Very emotional poem. Nicely written.

[Dhaye]

Do you know how much I miss you
Are you feeling my aches
are you missing me as I miss you
Are you reading this poem
are you there?

I feel the sadness...of missing someone who could not be with you for a moment. But still there's a hope of his presence, feeling the same way as you do...though he is not there physically.

[Seamstress]

Thank you so very much. I still occasion know he is here with me, even though he left this world in December.

[Emily B]

oh, of course, of course, stunning words

[Lily Mae]

I can only hope that they can.. that every single moment our thoughts drift to them that they are there with us too.. xo

[♪Barklight♪]

Beautiful, wondering if a person dear to you still watches over you from afar, wanting to know are they okay where ever they are? Brilliant.

[Seamstress]

Thank you so much for these kind words.

[Owlgirl]

Heartfelt and earnest. A sad symphony of a poem, beautiful wording.

[Seamstress]

Thank you for your kind words.

[Owlgirl]

It is truly a great poem.