I Don't Know What

Written a while back but it fits the sitchy right now as well.

Heart squeezed tight
Muscles tighten painfully
Something’s wrong
I don’t know what

Emotions everywhere
Tear ducts full
Something’s wrong
I don’t know what

Voice choking on a scream
Mind trying to shut down
Something’s wrong
I don’t know what

Words pour out
Hand races with the pen
Something’s wrong
I don’t know what

Prayers sent up
Hoping for healing
Something’s wrong
I don’t know what.

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Love the repetition "Something's wrong, I don't know what." It really builds

[Seamstress]

Thank you for the review Ricochet of my poem "I Don't Know What."

[Tattered Teddy]

I felt your prayers baby and thank you for them. I am very ill and have been told today that likely will not be leaving the hospital ever again. That is what.
But tis alright for I have God in my heart and by my side. I love you and this poem is written with such a lovely rhythm. Such feelings expressed in so few words.

[Seamstress]

*bites my lip and breathes in deeply, closes my eyes in prayer* All I can do from here tis pray that the most wondrous, amazing, most capable and original Physician, the Greatest Physican heals you.

[Sami Khalil]

A nice poem .
I like :
Prayers sent up
hoping for healing.