The little doll between roses

Today is going to be the day,
The day i dance,
sing
and beleive
And im not gonna stop,
I cant stop
if i stop
i fall
and die
I dont want to die,
Today im going to dance
between the shadows,
sing with no voice
and beleive in the impossible,
Today is just a normal day,
Still trapped,
And tortured by the devil in me,
Im a little doll,
Between roses,
Everyone is prefect
Except me.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Well it was uplifting and positive at the start at least.
Keep dancing and singing, though the shadows and the dark.
The light is out there, sometimes its just hard to find.
Great work though:)

[Castil]

Keep on writing I love your poems!

[Amelia May]

Woah.... there are very few times in my life when i am utterly confused by something. Maybe it is just because i cannot understand the advanced simplicity of such a poem as this (because I feel as if the meaning behind it is so clear but i am missing it entirely) do you mind explaining it to me? I love the fluidness of it, and all the beautiful details, I would just like to be able to appreciate it in its entirety.

[A Girl Who Never Smiled]

Well, what the poem is about a depressed girl, when she says "if i stop i stop i die i dont want to die," it means she doesnt want suicidal thoughts take over her and she commit suicide, "dance between shadows" everyday she is ignored by people, "sing with no voice" people say bad things about her and she doesnt know how to fight back but she responds in her mind thats why she sings but not out loud, "believe in the impossible" she thinks maybe it will get better but then something bad happens to her and she says is impossible to get better, "the devil in me" she starts hating herself and says to herself she is a horrible person, "i'm a little doll between roses" because she thinks differently than everyone, she starts thinking maybe i shouldn't been born, she says everyone are roses, because when you see roses, you think (thats so pretty, they're perfect), but when you see a doll it's not the same feeling and thought. I hope you understand now! :3