DISTORTED PERCEPTION

Rapid Fire Prostitution.

Distorted perception
Blinded elections
Divine interception
From unjust rejections
Amused by suggestions
Of sordid selections
I'm sprung with affection
From instant erection
So shoot the injection
And start my dissection
Point me in direction
To kiss my reflection
And see the perfection
That causes reflexion
Just give me protection
Lead me to transgression
Defuse the connection
From my cold profession
And their warm ejections
Beyond my discretion
Piece me down to sections
Answer all my questions
Then build me in sessions
And bridge my secession

Keep me in a prison
Just heal my condition
Cause what I envision
Is mass circumcision
To end the tradition
And cause some revision
And make an addition
Cause a mad collision
I've learned that division
Of vague definitions
Can cause an emission
Of verbal petition
So start your addiction
And pay the tuition
And soon you'll be wishin'
For my sweet conviction

Reviews

[アキス..]

I have absolutely no idea what this poem is about, but I love the rhythm to it. It's sorta hypnotic, maybe that's what it's about?
Anyway it's a nice piece.

[Keith]

I loved the way you whipped out these lines. Like a blackjack dealer flinging out cards at the table. It was a rapid fire expression of life. Nicely done :)

[*** Hey Jude***]

Love the the rhyme scheme that you have masterfully used to express perception. We all have a different one
"Cause what I envision
Is mass circumcision
To end the tradition
And cause some revision"
Well done ~ :-)