When The World Rained Glass

When The World Rained Glass

A Poem by Edward

Sitting in the twilight night,
I felt so amazing being bathed in the evening light.

I was sitting upon a mountain glade,
Viewing a forested valley with a river flowing with the reflection of a blade.

It was a beautiful warm evening,
And I wanted this to be our last meeting.

I wanted the world to always be like the beauty I saw before me,
Then the sky began to fall and it began to rain glass, but I did not flee.

I watched as little shards of glass fell from the collapsing sky,
I closed my eyes to see this moment forever, before I said my last goodbye.

I woke up, it was just a dream,
Reality had the best of me, or so it seemed.

Because when I go to the lake on my favourite hour,
I still feel the warmth and see my twilight world sparkling with the glass shard shower.

© 2013 Edward


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"I woke up, it was just a dream,
Reality had the best of me, or so it seemed"

A splendid read and write...:)..................


Posted 10 Years Ago


This poem is really good. Loved the imagery and emotion. Well penned! :) keep it up! :) 100%

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Edward

10 Years Ago

Your the best :3 glad you enjoyed it ! :3
The Invisible Girl

10 Years Ago

Lol!! I always enjoyed reading your work! ;) lol

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Edward
Edward

On a mountion top isolated from the rest of the World, Canada



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