I Am His Shadow

I Am His Shadow

A Poem by Edward

There always seems to be someone better,
One who seems.. Perfect.

He will always be better, and more cunning then you,
He just seems to slice you up and then force you to say what is true.

That he is better then you,
That he won her heart, and you got kicked with a shoe.

He.. Was Link,
Destined for far more greater things then just writing with ink.

He was my brother.. And I am his other half,
Ive turned to a shadow now.. I don't even utter the softest laugh.

I've turned to hatred and have given the cold shoulder,
And I don't even look older.

Zelda and Link,
They were together as soon as I blinked.

They fight together now,
I've been replaced this is something I won't allow.

I am Links shadow,
And I've been damaged by too many arrows.


© 2013 Edward


Author's Note

Edward
Not my best.. But wanted to write something

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It's always the worst being another's shadow and being aware how they are more noticed, more praised by everyone around them while they just seem to walk past you without a simple glance. I could really relate to this piece because I admit I am not the perfect friend, girlfriend, daughter or sister. I am overlooked due to my attitude and my moods. I am not always the happiest child, so making people not want to be around me. My siblings have always been better at school than me, while I would often struggle due to my disability. I may not be perfect, but there's no way some people should be treated different because they are not the same or measure up to the same level as those around them.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

You tell a true fact in today's society :) thanks for reading!



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It's always the worst being another's shadow and being aware how they are more noticed, more praised by everyone around them while they just seem to walk past you without a simple glance. I could really relate to this piece because I admit I am not the perfect friend, girlfriend, daughter or sister. I am overlooked due to my attitude and my moods. I am not always the happiest child, so making people not want to be around me. My siblings have always been better at school than me, while I would often struggle due to my disability. I may not be perfect, but there's no way some people should be treated different because they are not the same or measure up to the same level as those around them.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

You tell a true fact in today's society :) thanks for reading!

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On a mountion top isolated from the rest of the World, Canada



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