The Girl Who Liked To Dance In The Rain

It was on the hour of twilight when the storm came,
The soft rain had begun to fall, it's drops falling all over the grassy plain.

It was the cool and refreshing type of rain,
The type of rain that can wash away all the worlds pain.

It was at this moment I saw her dance,
She spun and dashed around, she seemed to be in a trance.

She spun around letting her wet tangled hair fly high,
It flew around and turned a shining golden brown in the twilight sky.

She then tripped and fell,
Into where the brown mud dwelled.

But instead of getting up in disgust and walking away,
She got back up and began to dance, and in the mud she stayed.

She grabbed mud and threw it into the air,
It flew everywhere and little bits got into her golden brown hair.

She had never experienced such happiness in her life,
She thought happy endings only happened in the afterlife.

She then sat down with a smile,
For a moment, the world was beautiful, and less hostile.

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Strange how once one gets a chance to dance in the rain for a bit, the world doesn't seem so messed up. The rain helps make everything feel in place, normal. Makes you open your eyes and see things clearer. I love dancing in the rain. It helps straighten out your inner emotions and washes out all the rage and hostility.

[Edward]

So very true :) so glad you enjoyed it :3

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This is nice...it would be interesting to see someone dance like this. I never really seen anyone dance in the rain but I know that there are those that love the rain and play in it. I can see this in my head as I read.

Good Job

[Edward]

I have seen only her dance in the rain. But I am glad that you enjoyed it :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

oh so you wrote it about an actual person and how you saw her dancing?

[Edward]

Yes, I know it sounds creepy but yea I was walking in the woods when it began to rain. It was sunset so I was heading home. So I was walking into the field and I saw her dancing

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Well I don't know if it's creepy...sounds like a nice walk. That's how writers get their inspiration and stuff.

[Edward]

Well she inspired me, and she smiled at me as I walked by

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Well at least she smiled...she sounds friendly

[Edward]

We had a small moment, we never talked.. It was only a eye to eye connection type moment.
It was cute, but she's out of my life now.. If I could be in a relationship it would be with a girl like her..

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

xD that's cute...you like girl's that like dancing in the rain? and did you move or something or you just don't see her anymore?

[Edward]

I like girls who like to have a good time, and that like to have fun by going to the movies or building pillow forts, and yes who like to dance in the rain. And I won't see her again, because I haven't seen her since that day, yea I might see her down the road, but it's extremely rare..

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

ahh I see...well you should try talking to her if you ever see her again

[Edward]

I doubt I will, luck isn't on my side.. :/

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

D: why you say that

[Edward]

Message me

[Felecia]

Geez, this reminds me of me I swear....love the rain so damn much and I love dancing in it (although I haven't done that in awhile, but ah well) Great job, another good write. Keep up the good work!

[Edward]

Glad you enjoyed it my dear friend :)

[The Invisible Girl]

Another great poem!!! :D Keep it up! 100/100

[Edward]

Thank you so much for reading! :D it means a lot!!

[The Invisible Girl]

You're welcome! I enjoy reading your poems! :)