That Night In The Rain

That Night In The Rain

A Poem by Edward

It was raining, thats all I knew,

I was heading home to see my baby boo.

 

It was stroming as I walked up the drive,

Thats when I saw her and another man begining to look alive.

 

I stopped and began to smoke,

It hurt so much I began to choke.

 

They decided to go out for the night,

I headed toward them, maybe she would see me and we would reunite.

 

It was a mistake,

Him and I began to fight, I was as swift as a snake.

 

When other guy was down, I went to claime my prize,

When I faced her there was only fear laying within her deep blue eyes.

 

I ran off in a rage, feeling hurt and sick,

She helped the other guy walk as he leaned on a wall made of brick.

 

I ran into an alley and broke down,

The rain becoming an overwelming sound.

 

The other guy went to search for me,

He rounded a corner and saw me, his face went grim.

 

I faced the other guy, and was suddenly slapped,

The snake was now trapped.

 

The other guy beat me senseless,

He didnt know that her and I shared a connection, and that he was hitting her aswell.. she was defenceless.

 

I thought of her,

All the memories of her and I began to reoccur.

 

The other guy kicked me once more,

He then walked away and didn't care anymore.

 

I lay there short of breath, the rain feeling as cold as death,

That was when I took my last breath. 

 

 

 

© 2013 Edward


Author's Note

Edward
I was inspired by one of my favorite bands. They are a Swedish group known as Dead by April. I watched their music video for thier song called "Calling" it inspired me write this piece. The link to the video is below. This poems is also not about me even though it is written in first person. It is from the guy in the videos point of view. So if you didnt understand the poem then watch the video. Maybe it will help you understand it better. Enjoy! :D

(*Warning* They are a scremo band!
You've been warned.)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u0AyLF1NGu8

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