Mind Games

Mind Games

A Poem by Edward

Were playing those mind games again love,
Remember? I can still hear the mourning dove.
Love is the answer to it all isn't it?
Or is it too hard to admit? 
I'm mesmerized by everything we do,
But when I see you with him, it makes me think till I turn blue.
I wish things were different. Don't you? 
But I can see its too hard for you to chew.
Darling I love you so much,
Please don't let go of the clutch.
I know I matter, and that you care,
But seeing you with him is extremely hard to bare.
I'm sorry I snap when I think everything is deceased,
But remember our fairy tale is Beauty and the Beast.
He makes you happy, that is good,
I think I've finally understood.
I promised I wouldn't let you go,
And I promise I will keep it so.
Love don't worry about our chestnut tree,
I'll be here when you need me.

© 2013 Edward


Author's Note

Edward
My brother asked me to write him a poem to the song Mind Games by John Lennon. He is in a love triangle at the moment and this song helps him. So being the awesome person I am I wrote him a poem to help him cope with it. Hope you Enjoy as much as he did :)

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My dear, sweet, Arkun. You're brother asked you to write this? Hm, interesting. I will definitely say, this poem certain radiates more than just a simple request to write a poem based off a song. I can feel strong emotions coming from this. This desperation, and complete love, maybe even a bit of anger? Frustration? Anyway, I'm surpised no one has reviewed this....I shall fix that! Good job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

My dear, sweet, Felecia.. Thank you for reviewing :) and did my brother ask me to write this? ;) may.. read more
Felecia

11 Years Ago

You're welcome! And you know I know the answer *chuckles*



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Another beautiful and emotional poem! :) Keep it up! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! :D
The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

You're welcome! :)
Not a happy poem. It must suck to be in that situation. Good write =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

It has its moments bunt it all gets better in the end :) thank you for reading!
love has no boundaries or borders...it is a relentless gnawing in the pit of the heart. you describe it well in this heartfelt piece....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

Thank you Quinfinn :3
Very beautiful write, I enjoyed reading this. Awesome job :3

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

Thank you fallen :) glad you enjoyed it! :D
The Fallen

11 Years Ago

You're welcome
My dear, sweet, Arkun. You're brother asked you to write this? Hm, interesting. I will definitely say, this poem certain radiates more than just a simple request to write a poem based off a song. I can feel strong emotions coming from this. This desperation, and complete love, maybe even a bit of anger? Frustration? Anyway, I'm surpised no one has reviewed this....I shall fix that! Good job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

My dear, sweet, Felecia.. Thank you for reviewing :) and did my brother ask me to write this? ;) may.. read more
Felecia

11 Years Ago

You're welcome! And you know I know the answer *chuckles*

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