The Terrible Feeling We Know As Heartbreak

The Terrible Feeling We Know As Heartbreak

A Poem by Edward

Heartbreak is the most horrid feeling,
It really prevents people from healing.

It's like losing your favourite teddy bear,
Your trying to end it all off with a prayer.

It's like losing the best person you could have ever known,
Then there is just empty ground where it had all grown.

Sometimes people try to remake what was there,
But they find that its too hard for them to bare.

They will often ask " what could I have done to keep it?"
Or "Why was I hit?"

To my friends who suffer this dreadful feeling,
It could be many more nights where you just stare at the ceiling.

But just wait, don't run after love,
You must wait, it will give you a shove.

Just keep waiting, don't lose hope,
Love will be there somewhere along the rope.

© 2013 Edward


Author's Note

Edward
Another poem for my drama class :) enjoy

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This is really good! :D keep it up! 100% woohoo! Lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

You're welcome! :D
"It's like losing the best person you could have ever known,
There is just empty ground where it had all grown. "

this line is awesOme ....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading :)

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