The Promise He Made

The Promise He Made

A Poem by Edward

I promised you id be there tonight,
I promised you that we would dine in the candle light.

But our paths diverged and split,
For some strange reason I got hit.

You got the call and heard the news,
You really do care because you forgot your shoes.

When you saw me you tried not to scream,
You wished it had all been a dream.

I couldn't have asked for a better person to be with,
Before you came along I thought love was a myth.
 
I want you forever, forever and always,
Your the only one who can hold my gaze.
 
Even though I have to go,
Always remember that I will always be you're special Virgo.
 
The beep's are becoming slow,
But I don't want to leave, you have shot me with your arrow.
 
I love you,
May your skys stay forever blue.

© 2013 Edward


Author's Note

Edward
I had to wright a poem for a scene in my drama class. We had to do a scene on a heart break song. My group chose Forever and Always. Enjoy :)

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this is so sweet. it was very touching.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Edward

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
good work ... superb i should say....

Posted 11 Years Ago



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On a mountion top isolated from the rest of the World, Canada



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