The Harsh Reality

The Harsh Reality

A Poem by Edward

The smoke is rising out,
People all stare in doubt.

The bridges are burned and the bad people are free,
So this is why are streets are full of so much debris.

Lies fall heavy just like false tales,
Things are so bad that no wind fills the ships sails.

Is this how it will all end?
The world on fire and ready to bend?

This is just a small example of what I think of,
I also wonder how this blood ever got onto my glove.

© 2013 Edward


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Edward
Wrote this and don't know what to think of it... Anyone like it?

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This is good! The descriptions were great. You really got me to think. Keep it up! :) 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

Thank you soo much :D glad you enjoyed it! :3
The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

You're welcome! :D
I do

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Edward

On a mountion top isolated from the rest of the World, Canada



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