Random Thoughts

Random Thoughts

A Poem by Edward

I have always wondered what would happen,

If I leave would anyone be saddend?

 

Now let me tell you one thing im not depressed,

Its just something I wish to ask, its my only request.

 

Sometimes people rarely talk with me,

And it makes me wonder if I annoy them like a bee.

 

Sometimes I feel alone,

Like ive sunk like a stone.

 

But most of the time im great,

And I love being in this state.

 

I got a girlfriend who I adore,

And friends that don't show me the door.

 

Yes life is good,

Maybe now ill remove my hood.

 

 

© 2013 Edward


Author's Note

Edward
Ive been thinking alot so i decided to write it all out

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Sometime we need to look at our life. Sadness and pity can steal our hope. You must release the bad thoughts and energy and find a good reason to be alive. I like the complete story and the strong ending in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

Thank you :3



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This is something relatable :)
Yes this little thought of wondering does happen to everyone

Posted 11 Years Ago


Edward

11 Years Ago

Thank you :3
Sometime we need to look at our life. Sadness and pity can steal our hope. You must release the bad thoughts and energy and find a good reason to be alive. I like the complete story and the strong ending in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

Thank you :3
Random thoughts are the best, ever mind-rambled?!? It really gets you thinking and eventually you get so carried away thinking nothing gets done!! Haha well great job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

I hear you :/ thanks :3
C.C. Marx

11 Years Ago

My pleasure!!!

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Edward
Edward

On a mountion top isolated from the rest of the World, Canada



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