I Can't Figure It Out

I Can't Figure It Out

A Poem by Edward

I see him push and push,
Now there is no more leaves on the bush.

He fights and guilts her too,
So much that its turning her blue.

I can't help but think why he can't get a clue,
Maybe it's too hard for him to chew.

Yes, maybe that's true,
But he is still destroying the girl he knew.

She is right in every way,
But he still dyes her cloud grey.

But there is a side to him that she didnt know,
The one side of him goes with the flow,
But the other likes to pick quarrels with the foe.


© 2013 Edward


Author's Note

Edward
Another poem. Just had to push some thoughts out of my head. It isn't about anyone. Just something I've witnessed while out

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*snorts and tries not to comment on authors note*
Well! I don't know if this is one of those times for my famous long reviews that only happen with certain poems..I don't know if I just ramble or actually give good critasim or whatever it is...I've been told they're good reviews
ANYWAY, this poem is really good, I honestly don't know why you don't get more reviews or views....I could probably be helping you with that...but I get lazy, which is mean of me.
Don't you just love how poetry is helpful when it comes to wanting to push thoughts and feelings out? Amazing I tell you.
Lovely poem *grins*
Um...I'm not sure if I actually gave imput on this poem...or just went on about how poetry is great...Well, I like this poem very much, ahaha

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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*snorts and tries not to comment on authors note*
Well! I don't know if this is one of those times for my famous long reviews that only happen with certain poems..I don't know if I just ramble or actually give good critasim or whatever it is...I've been told they're good reviews
ANYWAY, this poem is really good, I honestly don't know why you don't get more reviews or views....I could probably be helping you with that...but I get lazy, which is mean of me.
Don't you just love how poetry is helpful when it comes to wanting to push thoughts and feelings out? Amazing I tell you.
Lovely poem *grins*
Um...I'm not sure if I actually gave imput on this poem...or just went on about how poetry is great...Well, I like this poem very much, ahaha

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice flow of words and thoughts. The poem made me wish to know more. I like when words dance and create question more then answer. This poem did. I like the complete poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

Glad you liked it :)

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