Lies

Lies, lies, and more lies!
These are the types of things I dispise!

I'm always the one who gets hurt,
So that's why I'm lying here in the dirt.

Oh don't worry about me
For these things always happen to me.

Can't a guy like me be free?
Of these lies that have tied me to this tree?

I can't take that word anymore,
I just don't want to fight this war.

Here me? I'm done.
So leave me alone. You've had your fun.

Author's Note

I was mad at someone for a stupid reason so I had to blow off some steam ...

Reviews

[Felecia]

*coughs*
Um, well I like this poem as well (Again, I need to start getting people read your stuff....I'm too lazy to click buttons okay?!)
I can see the anger and the desperation in this poem. I'm sure this review would be longer...since I could go on about the topic of "Lying"...but lying is a sore subject for me I guess...no one likes to lie or be lied too. It may seem impossible. "Why would someone hate lying?" In the end, when people lie and they think it's the best solution at the time, they'll feel guilty about it one way or another, even if they feel like they don't.
Anywho, before I go over board, I'll end this review here. Well done, as always.

[The Fallen]

Atleast you blew your steam of in a poem. It's always a good way to get your emotions out. I hope everything is alright.. Very nice poem though. Good poems always happen when we are full of emotion, right? Nice work!

[Edward]

Thanks Fallen

[The Fallen]

Your welcome :)