Poverty – A lifeless life

Poverty is the worst thing ........

In-discernibly incarcerated for no crime,
Hushed pain unduly gifted,
Teasingly duped by rich,
An icon of clemency painted

Tantalizing moans are hollow,
Money befall a specter deity,
Lifeless actions reincarnate life,
Heart crammed with excruciating anxiety,

Loan counting myriad breadths,
Freedom snivel tears of bloody pain,
Life altered into game of ignominy,
Rights & Independence dies insane.

Questions murdered brutally,
Answers twisted barely insignificant
Meaningless time replicate itself,
Rich enjoys broadcast magnificent.

Justice evaporates in rain of emptiness,
Aloof and gloomily treated,
Poverty imitate a situation,
As if god has undyingly cheated.

Thy soul has carved incarnation,
Salacious solitude crafting demise,
Oh lord! Give thy soul relief,
This poverty kills your premise.

Author's Note

Poverty is one of the worst thing effecting few countries................

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

What I like here is both the perfect use of words and the noble message. Fine job

[Dominique]

That was beautiful, I am always at awe when I read your poems. Poverty is terrible and you gave it the demeanor that was needed. I like how you showed people the side they never truely see. That they always block out.

[Cassie Fraga]

OOOHHHH WOWOWOWOWOW!!! **wipes eyes** I appreciate the real and truth within these lines... GREAT WORK, a heartfelt piece indeed!!

[Manpreet]

A heartfelt work! beautiful and perfect word use!!!

[$êlvån]

This one ws very touching...hats off to u for few spectacular things lyk gr8 words,deep meanings etc etc...keep it up

[Richy Moon]

This is a great peom that unfortunately describes many people's lives now. You have a talent of finding words for many situations

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your words. When nations are born to struggle. They have little chance to survive. I like the honest and meaningful feel in the words. Would be nice if the nations that could would send food and medicine. Wood for constructing home, schools and hospitals instead of guns and tanks. I like the ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Renée]

Giving light to a horrible situation..that there doesn't seem to be a solution to rid the world of this horrible thing to humanity...

[Michael G.]

Well said and written.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is the reality of poverty...I have seen it, and it is heartbreaking in a cruel world.
"Loan counting myriad breadths,
Freedom snivel tears of bloody pain,
Life altered into game of ignominy,
Rights & Independence dies insane."~ Heartbreaking... Well done!