Impish Rain

Describing a rain ...... and me..

Entangled inside inept thoughts,
Suddenly peacock started balleting
Wind caressed tenderly my hairs,
Eyes gazed at sky perplexing.

Soggy Clouds organizing beats,
To deliver saccharine symphony,
Lightning dancing incarnating Lord Shiva,
Breeze transformed into ferocious harmony.

Still gazing incessantly tinted black painting,
When a drop kissed my cheek,
Instant smile cross the lips,
Instantly Symphony reached peak.

Cuddling drops driving ecstasy,
My body still wetting frenetically
Harsh wind demanding courage,
Eyes were still hypnotized magically.

Trees were still dancing chaos,
Thrill dissolving ado,
Order being prayed by all,
Eyes still drinking weather steadily and slow

Impish smile subsisting soul,
When darkness disappeared in light
Amiable symphony died with time,
Leaving my ambitious soul hypnotized.

Reviews

[Dominique]

I know that feeling, I love the rain too. I love the poem :)

[Manpreet]

Beautiful work! A delicate moment artfully presented!!

[Leigh]

Rain changes the way that nature behaves, while us humans try to carry on as normal with our abnormal lives. I like very much the use of the word 'symphony' in this poem as it describes the sound and action absoloutely relevant to rain storms, where there are rains within rains that overlap and complete with each other.

[Coyote Poetry]

Rain had the power to create life and take out complete cities. I like your description. I believe one day old mother nature will do in all the sources of power and wise people best know how to light a fire and hunt. I like your thoughts and strong ending to the excellent poetry.