Our Marriage

A dream come true.... .... for true lovers

 

A stunning day arrives with stunning pace,

That seat was too comfortable to wait,

Eyes were glued at the entrance,

From where our distance will abate.

Today is our day,

We are tying the knot,

Life will dissolve in love,

Our togetherness will seal the slot.

 

As my eyes met your sensuous figure,

A smile lighted up in a flash,

You were so red in color,

I thought your body got a gash.

 

You were approaching towards your life,

Slowly and steadily, looking down,

Your shyness was wrapping your face,

You were looking most gorgeous in the town.

 

That red sari was looking splendid,

As if a doll wrapped in envelop,

Your cheeks were so bubbly and pink,

A feel of restlessness was starting to develop.

 

You came to me and we sat together,

That moment was a dream come true,

You were quietly sitting & smiling,

And your outrageous beauty looking anew.

 

Now it’s time to take an oath,

To love and live forever mutually,

Those seven religious rounds of fire,

Concealed our world together with integrity.

 

Now I was yours & you were mine,

We completed first chapter of adore,

“We will love forever” we pledged,

Still numerous hugs were in store.

 

This ceremony was the proof,

Of our trust, truth and care,

Our true love got its destination,

Now our sweet home will get its flair.

 

Everybody danced to our ceremony,

It was a memorable atmosphere,

Our lives fused as one,

 We were happy uphill seventh sphere.

Author's Note

Do give me your reviews about this poem.......................... this is a poem from my upcoming book....

Reviews

[The Flame of the Knight]

I like it. Too bad i didnt read it sooner.

[sushi]

I would know it was a beautiful marriage from your write...

"That seat was too comfortable to wait,
Life will dissolve in love,
Our togetherness will seal the slot."

The lines were touching and took me to ur marriage...

[SHEEMA HUQ]

a tribute, a memoir, an important family heirloom.... great.

[Ray]

The passion that emanates from this poem is splendid !

[may]

Lovely ! :)

[Thea]

OMG! My cousin married in the exact date when you published this poem, haha! This was definitely beautiful! Weddings are everyone's dream. Nothing beats the happiness that one can have when he/she is with the person he/she loves!
:)))

[Renée]

Love it !

[Suditi]

Wow!
This flows perfectly!
While reading it, i could play so many scenes in my mind..scenes from the Indian weddings.
A great write.

[Coyote Poetry]

A wedding is always a good day. Good to see two people begin a new life together. I like the story and the positive ending to the outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Dominique]

I loved it and I can't wait for that book now. It was beautiful.