My mischievous friend

"My sweet and naughty friend"

 

Oh my friend

Small cute and lovely,

A heavenly sign,

a miraculous beauty.

 

A touch , a touch,

Of a pretty cutie,

Expressions tasty,

Like sweetest frooty.

 

Fighting on and on

& on & on & on,

Yet waiting for me,

When everyone is gone.

 

Laughing and laughing

Sitting in my lawn

Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha,

“dusk to dawn”.

 

You are the truth,

The lie and the lie,

Transforming into dancing angels,

In the utmost sky.

 

 

One step ahead

Giving one bye,

Smiling “Hello”

& a mischievous bye.

 

Right to left

And again left to right,

Every second tickles

With a brand new fight.

 

I won you lost,

Weighing light,

Continuing forever,

Days after nights.

 

Emotion flows,

& glows & blows,

Flickering moods,

From highs to lows.

 

Lost in the speed,

My gear slows,

Trin trin trin ,

1000 horns blows.

 

A mischief dancing,

To and fro and fro and to,

Hold hold hold,

From head to toe.

 

Cluch my hand

in woe woe woe,

stop stop stop my friend,

the way is “No Go”

Author's Note

Fun with a friend........... or a funny friend ???

Reviews

[Manpreet]

Cute one!!

[Richy Moon]

:) This is a very nice and cherry little piece, and it is very well written. I like it.

[The Flame of the Knight]

I would say both..... both options are good.....

[Cathy Wattam]

A fun, sweet poem. Just one thing - "1000 horns blows" would read better as "1000 horns blow". Other than that, i liked it :-)

[Thea]

Aw, I find this cute and I don't know why, haha! XD
It sounds like you've written the whole thing while smiling. And Robbie's review made me laugh, "happy dance", haha! XD
A great poem! Well done!
:)))

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I'm tickled...How sweet is this?... You are Smitten! This is a refreshing write! I can almost see you doing the "Happy dance". lol
This is a wonderful play on words, my friend! :)




cluch- "clutch"

[Tate Morgan]

hi liked it The second from last stanza would ring true better maybe if to and fro were reversed So that toe and fro were the rhyme

[Chesney W.]

this is a good write...excellent rhyme scheme .... lovely!

[I'm Just me:)]

this is awesome reminds me of my best friend lol :)

[Belle]

Sometimes poem means little or more,
yet stimulus of words alone can claim our attention.
This is a piece that need not to understand deeply,
but is something one can enjoy to read and/or to hear.

Yes, I did have fun playing with the sounds and rhythm you
have produced in here.

'Tis nother piece I so love from you my friend.
Belle~