A Glimpse of you – 2

"When eye meets eye"

An anxiety for a freedom,

A frivolous mind gets the work.

An exotic beauty glares in eye,

An impish heart gets the jerk.

 

A charismatic change in air,

Turning water into a wine,

O lord! Her eyes were tranquil,

Want to spend eternity sitting inside.

 

 

Just a second plug energy,

Leave us mesmerizing for hours,

A feel resurrecting in heart,

Leaving us excited even in showers.

 

A slant towards life,

Igniting zeal, enthusiasm and spirit,

Every moment engenders smile,

No tears, no pain, no culprit.

 

Every second dances without music,

Thoughts bewildered in merry,

Her garb were so warm,

I was enticed in confusion of cherry

  

Is this a reality or fun,

Every moment souvenir touchy showers,

Just a glimpse of you,

Instils unknown mesmeric powers.

 

This is a world of my thoughts,

Viciously circulating with time,

Every second is an era,

Of, romanticism, love, values and rhyme.

Author's Note

A glimpse of you - 2 ..................... a magic of eyes entering to heart :-)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Every second dances without music,
Thoughts bewildered in merry,
Her garb were so warm,
I was enticed in confusion of cherry"
Your poetry is alive and strong. Each set of lines adding to a beautiful place and good emotion. A perfect ending for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Chesney W.]

a truly excellent write about love and compassion.. I adore this type of writing... very beautifully written .. great job!!

[Xerclipse]

i dont read many romantic or love poems but this one was really inspiring and great. keep it going, because i can feel the emotions.

[MusicLover]

i agree completely with Coyote Poetry

[The Flame of the Knight]

I like it. It is very descriptive. It is exactly how people should feel....

[I'm Just me:)]

really beautiful, amazing and i love it!!!

[Richy Moon]

So beatiful and romantic... I like it :)

[that-little-green-monst..]

Really nice poem! Great job!

[Dominique]

This is amazing. I can't believe what I am reading