My proposal

" Proposal"

A face so cute & so sexy,

It’s Irresistible to take off the eyes,

Cheeks are so bubbly like a kid,

It’s raining flower in each of your smiles,

 

I am a fan of your brown catlike eyes,

Your sweet lips tempt me to kiss,

You are my beautiful queen,

Every touch of you is a feel of bliss.

 

My nose still breathe your breadth,

 Delicate ears hear your whisper,

I just love you incessantly,

You are the resurrection of my power

 

When I hold your hand it feels like heaven,

Every thought has an unexplained sensation to add,

I am completely bizarre in passion,

Just a glimpse of you makes me mad.

 

You are the diamond of my world,

Essential like air to live,

My dexterously pliable body,

Anxiously waiting……..what your lips will give.

 

I want to wear your attire,

Dissolving in your eyes of heaven,

Your one touch sublimes my sanity,

Together we will surpass seas counting “one to seven”.

 

I will just say three words with assurance in all,

I am lost just because “I love you”,

Consider this as my first & last propose to you “My life”,

Please answer --- Do you love me too???

Author's Note

what do you say.................will she say Yes....after reading this ;-)

Reviews

[CourtneyShay]

yes i love yu and this poem

[The Flame of the Knight]

I think she might say yes. There is no reason not to, and if he loves her this much.... There is no doubt that she would say yes.

[I'm Just me:)]

i enjoyed it very much i love how it flows and its amazing i love it

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this story. Good when two people find the same path and find things in common.
"You are the diamond of my world,
Essential like air to live,
My dexterously pliable body,
Anxiously waiting……..what your lips will give. "
I like the complete poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Lagachu]

nice poem she might say yes...give it a try.

[Dominique]

I defanately think so after that. I would....