The Burning Desire - 1

A fire to Desire

 

Looking through window I smiled,

A caress thought cuddled with sense,

Wind swiftly tried to elude,

Failing at simulating your presence.

 

Who are you? , I can’t portray,

Never saw you but can truly feel,

A magician of love and words,

My senses lost to your wordy zeal.

 

Every single word adds flavour,

Carving ice cream of curiosity,

Smiles adding wishes to meet,

Even a second away suffer like animosity

 

A magnetism blended with adore,

Conquering the sky of desires,

Meeting you prioritize my life,

Every lost second adding flame to fires.

 

Feeling the love inside,

Anxiously I closed eyes merrily,

Attracting to create a love filled globe,

She smiled at me typing “Luv you My Honey”

 

A palpable mysterious authority,

Turing my days into nights,

Now my windows chat,

Elates inside me, exquisite flights.

 

I asked her today while talking,

What’s these unquenched Fires,

She typed with miraculous appeal,

“Honey this is “The Burning Desire””.

  

 

Author's Note

this poem is for someone.....with whom we chat a lot and then want to meet at any cost.................................lolzzzzzzzzzzz

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Watch out for those burning fires. Some fire isn't support to be touched. I have known many people on the internet. Hard to know what is real or not. I like the story and I hope it had a happy ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Renée]

Do be careful...beautiful write ( ;

[thehottamale]

I can feel the emotion and desire in this poem, I love your wording choices, you have such a unique and different style but it's refreshing.

[Thea]

This was a great piece...And I agree with Coyote! Watch out and don't give your trust to anyone so easily...Anyway, I enjoyed this poem...
:)))

[Cathy Wattam]

Ah the dangers of internet chatting. How can you know who is real and who is fake? Only by meeting them and even then, they could be a con artist. Nicely written work.

[CourtneyShay]

awwww sweetie i love it

[The Flame of the Knight]

Very, very good.... You have a way with words.... I like it.... Very descriptive...

[Leigh]

Oh the beauty of anonymity and the mysterious stranger, who we create a fantastic image of. Are we disappointed when we finally meet them? after they have taken so long to portray themselves in the best possible light.

[$êlvån]

Loved it...ur hard work is visible here

[Dominique]

Wow, this is amazingly well written and I love this. it truly shows how much love you have for her.