A glimpse of you

"When eye meets life"

 

A smile on a face,

With an incisive astute eye,

A face of cute attire,

An angel undoubtedly not so shy.

 

A voice insisting to simper,

A style insisting on being agile,

A figure maintained to admire,

Few words do, no justice to style.

 

A thought of parting pain,

sensing sweat in existence of rain,

A lovely carving molded with mischief,

Releasing it with eyes like drain.

 

A bliss of love enacted in adore,  

Every climate turned “spring”,

Like a mountain wetting in rain,

Tied with lightning bells to ring.

 

A drop trickling down the cheek

Taking excitement to its peak,

Just a smile covering the lips,

Erasing the existence of “bleak”.

 

Every pain of mine feels so sweet,

Every road crossed with dancing feet,

Oh my god I didn’t realize this clue,

It’s just because of…A glimpse of you.

 

Author's Note

enjoy the fun :-)

Reviews

[Dominique]

I love your work it is truly amazing.

[Manpreet]

Beautiful work!

[Empirik]

I like the four-line structure of this kind of poetry. It flows fast as the emotions within the situation do. That is great! I really love the ending too. Good job! :)

[The Flame of the Knight]

I like it. I think that this is very good.

[CourtneyShay]

i love this

[Leigh]

Really amazing use of the language in such an unconventional way, we sometimes catch a glimpse of what's behind the beautiful facade..great write

[Thea]

A really lovely and sweet poem...It was simple...The words you used in the lines were great...The flow was nice as well..Great job.
:)))

[$êlvån]

gud 1 dude.....................

[Renée]

Lovely write about the glimpse that makes hearts flutter ( :

[Michael G.]

It is sometimes amazing what a single glimpse can do.
The content is excellent.
The flow of the poem is good.
Great write.