Sprouting Love

Sprouting Love

A Poem by Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
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A friendship turning into love

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The divine nature got stunned,

When our destination merged,

First time you held my hand,

A lightning of feeling got surged.

 

Wind was stirring mischievousness,

Sun was concealed with cloudy envious,

We were travelling with time,

Yet its impact was extraneous.

 

 Our hands were glued together,

My shoulder was happiest to serve your head,

The bus was in its own world,

 We were cuddling in our own thread.

 

Smiling were showering from words

Discussions were feeling aloof,

That bench still cherishes that moment,

Where we started our home without roof.

 

 Moon’s shyness was evident,

His shine was spreading onto my life,

We were experiencing telepathy,

Silence was covering that benign strife.

 

Those 7 hours were magical,

Passed with speed of light,

Every second was exquisite,

Dissolve into my soul, a delight.

 

We were together as friends,

Yet something was strange,

We were talking endlessly,

Dearth and miseries were out of range.

 

 We created a true friendship tie,

Translating earth into sky,

Roller coaster has already climbed,

Ride was definite from that high.

© 2012 Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"


Author's Note

Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
A journey......enjoyed till eternity

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Great imagery, very well written. Cheers!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Best days of life is traveling. Can create good friendships and memories.
"Every second was exquisite,
Dissolve into my soul, a delight."
No weakness in this amazing poem. A very good ending.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


A truly beautiful poem...Sweet and lovely...
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderfull I absolutly love your poetry. :) well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wonderful! I really enjoyed this write as it traversed across two people in a true feeling. Friendship is amazing when it happens like this! Good job! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful poem! Amazingly penned!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the imagery in this piece, nicely written & expressed.



Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautifully written, loving piece. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Sweet :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely... ( :

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"

Delhi, Delhi, India



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I am a dim ray in the world of enthralling darkness of misjudgment and iterations. I am a note of melodious tune of peace in the world of cruelty; I am a mischievous thought of freedom in a cage of fe.. more..

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