Suicide - II - A Will confronting Death

Reviving from the ashes

Standing on the edge,

I gazed the sky,

A lightning strikes the rain,

Horrendous pain smile at the cry.

 

But the eye refused to close,

Steps defies to move ahead,

Deciphering life in death,

A mysterious power reviving the dead.

 

Chronology of death beseeching the existence,

Amassing numerous reasons,

Life stubbornly denying the diversion,

Dissolving dissimilar seasons.

 

A revival in pursuit of amazement,

Smiling at will of liveliest rain,

A warrior of will stand at the edge,

Surpassing this colossal pain.

 

Looking at the depth of death,

I stretched my knuckles,

“I am the blaze of Will,

You can never muddle me in shuffles”

 

"I will transcend the time,

Outshining in the heavens of optimism,

You can detain my soul momentary,

But can never sink it in pessimism "

 

"I will live till end with zeal,

This, I, at this point announce,

O Death! , I challenge you for my life,

Try firmly for your supreme denounce".

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

A will which denies the darkness

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

It`s really wonderful how you succeed your poem to sound in a way like ancient Greek poems :) You have unique choice of words, the theme is always deep and philosophycal about life and death. Warrior of Will is determined to live again!I`m happy for him :)
A revival in pursuit of amazement,
Smiling at will of liveliest rain,
I liked it!

[MusicLover]

I love it. It truely describes how many people feel, but are to afraid to admit it. Keep up the amazing work

[Manpreet]

An extremely powerful expression artistically penned. Great write!

[The Flame of the Knight]

Wow. Deep, dark and... suicidalness. I liked it though. It was good.

[Dominique]

Hmm. Good i dont think the title fiys though... That may just be me though.