Our First Kiss

A kiss of love..............

A rain raising the adrenaline,

Emotion bewildered in love,

Slight cold in atmosphere,

Making us to squeeze in like glove.

 

That park was wetted by rain,

Our presence made the day,

A sweet sensation was tapping,

Only love was there to lay.

 

My hands were smoothing your shoulders,

Your naughtiness was at the peak,

Your eyes had staggering shine,

We were covered by leaves streak.

 

We were hugging each other,

Hiding from rain and swimming in ecstasy,

Drops were still in pursuit of your cheek,

we were dissolved in our own fantasy.  

 

 

Suddenly wind crashed in-between our intimacy,

When my lips was in pursuit of your cheek,

Drops were feeling bizarre,

Environment’s character turned freak

  

Suddenly my lips got their destination to rule,

When your senses were hiding in my solace,

Instant rejuvenation from the act,

Encourages continuity with praise.

 

That regime ended at your lips,

Leaving us mesmerized forever,

Rain sweated from our heat,

And that passion packed glamour.

Author's Note

How does it feel after reading......................want to kiss???????

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Really so sweetly described feeling, yes it arises need of kiss! It is honest, written as memory-like form, your verses have so classical form as always..My favotite moment is this :
Drops were still in pursuit of your cheek,
we were dissolved in our own fantasy.
thank u!
~nia~

[Thea]

Aw...Haha! This was totally sweet and romantic...You've expressed this very well...The choice of words are great too...Amazing work!
:)))

[Ashley Marie]

awwe that's so cute, you really expressed your feelings well!

[Renée]

Ya think? lol Of course ! You expressed the feeling very well... and what a delightful way of writing poetry.!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

When love is meant to be, they say you can see fireworks going off in your mind. Never fully understood that, never saw them for myself - but Ive had many relationships quickly go down the drain. Someone for everyone.

Anyway, this is beautifully written. Great lines and word play. Amazing write.

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is veeeeeeeery good poem!! I specially like the last stanza..Well done :D

[Cassie Fraga]

YES!! YES!!! hahahahaha.... such a BEAUTIFUL READ!!!! mmmmm... yes very tasty.
all the passion locked in these lines... renders the reader awe struck....
**tips my lyrical wand to you**

[The Flame of the Knight]

Are you offering? Im joking. It was very, very good. So full of emotion. It was incredible.

[Dominique]

It realy describes the kiss ecpesailly the first. the last two stanzas were amazing.