Since I met you

Since I met you

A Story by Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
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Just a flow of emotions

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A story of me and my lovely angel


                               On the very first day I saw you shying and smiling searching for food. I felt like someone entering into my heart through my eyes. I didn’t believed it at first but when I went back to my home I realized that a cute and beautiful face of yours with those glittering eyes which symbolizes the shyness of the heavenly relieve and those two smiling lips demonstrating the passion of love which was inside your heart, made me slightly tumble in sweat during the murky cold winter. It was the time when I thought that something really happened to me but never knew what that was. I didn’t have an idea to know your side.

Then the time passed and as we started talking to each other. That New Year started with a lot of things for me. The almighty (god) has chosen someone for me and now it’s time for me to realize it as soon as I can. While our talk your sweet voice was like a cloud of joy in the sky of happiness which was bringing me the feel of excitement like a touch of a showery rain every day. Every conversation of us felt as if the gap between us is diminishing. I was a bit sure with the outcome till now as we were talking since past three or four months but still your Yes was due.

Then came the month of ‘Love’ and I never had an idea what is going to happen, I always thought of having someone by my side forever, with whom I can sit forever silently and yet feel like talking everything. Till this time we were already gone into a level of good friendship but there was something more to it , your beautiful face was still in front of my eyes every second as if sun is refusing to set even in the dark. But I was sure that it was like a moon because whenever I closed my eyes there was darkness but still in that darkness there was a pretty face smiling at me and attracting towards itself. I never thought that this month is going to bring something special to me but I knew that something is going to happen soon. Then came the day when I visited to your house and that was a day just before the” Day of love” , the Valentine’s day. On that day we were sitting together in a café as still I was looking into the sea of love and compassion , as if I was diving alone and never wanted to get out of it. That sea was your diamond like brown eyes which were shining like a jewel. You as of now wanted to say something but may be you were expecting me to start. But, I, like always, was waiting for you to hold my hand and say it to me. The reason for this was not because I can’t say those words but the reason was just one- ever since I wanted to be in a relationship like this I always wanted to get a partner who should start first because in the course of life if I, at any point of time started to fade away in the relation, she, will never let me fade away and this love of her will always make me feel desirous. And from my side, I, in any case will not let her fade away from my side. You said that you were waiting for someone who will come to you before or during valentine and will make you the queen of his heart. I, on the other hand didn’t knew that you were talking about me or you were just talking in general. So the day of love i’e “Valentine day” passed with ,me, still watching your pretty eyes and making you smile with a shy expression conquering the heart of a beautiful soul ready to hold a human to take him to the heaven. Then as we spend time together, we were actually went to the level of that lovely expression but only from inside, we didn’t spoke to each other about it.  The taste of the Maggie you made with love and your simple line of  “ Aise kyoon dekh rahey ho”(means Why are you looking at me like this) (when the tides of my eyes touches the land of your face) and “Idhar mat dekho udhar dekho”(Don't see me, see there) with a mischievous smile is still into my heart. The songs that I played with guitar were really from my heart as you listened and smiled at every one of it and ordering for more.

Then the day came when I have to leave for my home as I have other things to take care too. When I left from your place you never gave me a hug and I was disappointed because I was expecting a hug. But why was I expecting a hug? This was a simple thought which never came to my mind. I left it for the next time, because still there was a belief that everything will fall at right place .The tree of love and passion will have its flower of hugs and fruits of kisses at the right time. I sat in the train and was still in a slight disappointment. As the evening bent its knees in front of the king, the darkness started to develop its army to conquer the sky. I was still inside the train and then my phone knocked my ears as if something is going to happen which I was waiting from so long. As I saw the Phone number a smile of trust and belief captured the atmosphere of that slight disappointment, Yes that was your number like every day. We started talking again like always and a hour already passed when you finally came up with a line that I still remember and that line was something that I was expecting from your you from quite a time.

That line started with “I am falling in …….. with you”. The message was clear now into the heart of both of us but I was still waiting for you to speak that word which I felt every time whenever I see your brown eyes and your scenic beauty attached with a splash of mischievous smile. Finally after a handy battles of hearts, my love (you) won against your love (me). You finally spoke that word “I am falling in love with you” and I who was already lost to this battle long ago finally uttered those lovely words which will never lose its importance in the future of our relationship and those words were  “I love you”.

And from there on started a sweet love story of both of us...................

 

To be continue...............

© 2012 Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"


Author's Note

Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
Lets see how it goes....lol..........so sweet right?????

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I really enjoyed this.. abliet with few grammatic errors, but it's very interesting.. Well done :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the internal struggle and battle of wills. There are grammar mistakes which affect the flow. I recommend that you edit the story to make sure that all the verb tenses agree. Perhaps add commas for clarity.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow. This is incredible. And so descriptive. I like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
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Delhi, Delhi, India



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