A Hope still…..Alive

Waiting for the ultimate

A misty life dictating a crestfallen heart,
burdening soul with tears of repentance,
befuddled with the open eyes,
lost fervor in pursuit of true existence,

I am puzzled in this lusty world,
Profoundly plunged in fury of rain,
My existence is belittled by fallacy,
Every second counting gain.

Still someone is reviving the phoenix,
a muddle is gladding from the lane,
I will for sure realize My Dream,
every adversary will whimper in vain.

The wind of change will emerge,
Every tear will exterminate,
The future will revolutionize for excellence,
When our dreams will be written in transformation’s slate

Author's Note

This is about a heart which is amazed by the adversities created out of no where, he is surprised how a simple thing can become complex........and so he writes for it........

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"The wind of change will emerge,
Every tear will exterminate,"
I could the hope and energy in your poem. We need more hopeful and kind people in our world. A ounce of kindness can open closed doors and mind to new ideas. Thank you for your positive and outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Dominique]

Wow. I like it. It shows everyone a bit of hope.

[luna11]

Beautifully written. It flows so nicely and the wording is amazing.
X

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Hope always have place in our hearts! even in very hard moments of life, God give us delight and calmness from our hope and believe! Never can be easy for people who always search..But in the end they will find! Strong message is here, i loved the careful and poetic words here, your verses are so nice in rhytm, just the last line was little longer to read...I loved it!
~nia~

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Inspirational, well-written write. Loved the last stanza, really stood out among the rest - making this a powerful piece.Nicely done.