A Hope still…..Alive

Waiting for the ultimate

A misty life dictating a crestfallen heart,
burdening soul with tears of repentance,
befuddled with the open eyes,
lost fervor in pursuit of true existence,

I am puzzled in this lusty world,
Profoundly plunged in fury of rain,
My existence is belittled by fallacy,
Every second counting gain.

Still someone is reviving the phoenix,
a muddle is gladding from the lane,
I will for sure realize My Dream,
every adversary will whimper in vain.

The wind of change will emerge,
Every tear will exterminate,
The future will revolutionize for excellence,
When our dreams will be written in transformation’s slate

Author's Note

This is about a heart which is amazed by the adversities created out of no where, he is surprised how a simple thing can become complex........and so he writes for it........

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"The wind of change will emerge,
Every tear will exterminate,"
I could the hope and energy in your poem. We need more hopeful and kind people in our world. A ounce of kindness can open closed doors and mind to new ideas. Thank you for your positive and outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[MOON]

Excellent write , hope and affirmation that adversity will be conquered.

[Blue Ivory]

You are extremely talented, my friend! You have a very rich vocab and your style is great as well. Good work!

[$êlvån]

loved it...

[pinpen]

I am puzzled in this lusty world,
Profoundly plunged in fury of rain,

i like these words here, the whole write is amazing.
Thanks for your reviews as well.

[Thea]

That was motivational...We should always believe that there's hope no matter what happens...Great work!
:)))

[Sleeping Maiden]

Hmmm such an interesting poem! I love the thoughts here. Your imagery is amazing. I can picture this piece in my mind as i read. I love how unique and creative this is!! Wonderful work!

[Suditi]

The last stanza! My favorite!
It seems like a well thought out poem, which flows beautifully throughout.
Great poem.

[Renée]

Perseverance yes ? its true so many times simple turns to a uphill climb...you write well

[SilentNiaAngel]

=)