My queen

My queen

A Poem by Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
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This poem is for my sweet heart .....

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A thought of your smile,

In piercing silence of hell,

Searching fragrance of your style,

in a graveyard silence to yell.

 

Looking for a harmony of heart,

Adding crystal of tears in eye,

Yes it's like crawling desert,

When I conquered with you "the sky".

 

I touched your hand in woe

and you were smiling from head to toe

like scenic beauty emphasizing in chant

you took my perception high to low.

 

I touched your lips

And felt the shyness of flowers

I kissed your eyes

Found every second boosting powers.

 

I kissed your heart with passion,

Felt every second a divine relaxation,

you made me tremble in sweat,

your every touch was a sign of exclamation.

 

I held your hand in murky weather,

Turning majestic seconds in hours,

your magical renovation of love,

Turn me on like touchy showers.

 

So is it your magic of emotions,

Or my misery of depressing time,

you are the prettiest of all angels,

And a relinquish sweetness of my rhyme.

© 2012 Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"


Author's Note

Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
This poem is dedicated to all who love someone ...deeply from their heart...forever.

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A very sweet poem. I personally like the last stanza the best and the line "So is it your magic of emotions," really sticks with me. A great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nyc job:)startin ws gr8 and flow ws nyc

Posted 12 Years Ago


Everything about this is simply stunning. A beautiful, loving piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is really full of love...It was really sweet and the words are just sincere. A really beautiful poem...Great job!
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


That is true to every lover and I think it is wonderful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I particularly liked the line, "I kissed your heart with passion," it is so intimate a line. I also think when you have a true connection with someone, you kiss their mind as well. : )


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love it alot really sweet

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aw i really love the last stanza the best it's sweet.
So nicely written.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"

Delhi, Delhi, India



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