Describing You

An emotion of love

A thought of your smile
In piercing silence of hell
Searching fragrance of your style
And a graveyard silence to yell.

Looking for a harmony of heart
Add crystal of tears in eye
Yes it is like crawling desert
When I reached with you in sky.

I touched your lips
And felt the shyness of flowers
I kissed your eyes
Found every sec like boosting powers.

I touched your hand in woe
And you were smiling from head to toe
Its like scenic beauty emphasizing in chant
Taking my perception high to low.

I kissed your heart with passion
and felt the divine relaxation
you made me tremble in sweat
your every touch was a sign of exclamation.

I hold your hand in murky weather
Turning majestic seconds in hours
your magical renovation of love
Turn me on like touchy shower.

So is it your magic of emotions,
Or my misery of depressing time,
You are an awesome angel,
And a relinquish sweetness of my rhyme

Author's Note

A description of love...........

Reviews

[Ink Angel]

Wow! this is full of passion, smiling from head to toe, love it! thank you :) I love your profile Journal of the Soul........

[MoriartyMesa]

This actually has a MoTown feel to it, nice work.

[Thea]

This poem is filled with sugar-coated words! The rhyme scheme was flawless...You did a great job here.
:)))

[CourtneyShay]

wow i love it so sweet and describes every thing

[joshua deathdealer]

This is a fantastic read. I really enjoyed the feel. You are a very talented writer. Thanks for sharing your art.

[AK]

Very nice:)

[SilentNiaAngel]

I Love this=D

[just is]

Wow this is amazing!
I love the rhyme scheme alot.
Very beuatiful read.

[Coyote Poetry]

"You are an awesome angel,
And a relinquish sweetness of my rhyme"
A beautiful poem of love and desire. I like your description and the strong ending. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote