Your Touch

This is a poem about..............someone special.........very special....

A sense is choking other,

Crescent eyes are shining,

Divine merging with souls,

Your touch felt like bribing.

 

Lost in elation of fervour,

Anxieties crawling skies of desires,

Snow wed nature smells,

assorted power of fires.

 

I am lost in your heed,

When you touched my hand,

Angel danced profoundly,

My heaven merged with land.

 

I captured every second with exactitude,

Locked innate passion wisely,

  But sky gazed the sun of love,

My pact enacted untidily.

 

Still my hand tattooed your shadow

Visible even in dark,

Irrelevant is the nature,

Even snow generates the spark.

 

That’s the relevance of your touch,

Turned on insatiable lust,

Every second felt it in me,

Your supreme power of trust   

 

Galaxies moved heavens searching stars,

I swimmer in your sea,

Credential flows with time,

That’s the touch to see.

 

Frozen that moment of love,

In refrigerator of our epic relation,

Resurrection of your senses,

In the dearth of died elation.

Author's Note

This is a poem from my upcoming book........please tell me about the feelings....... you gather after reading this piece.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. The writers on this site from India had impressed me. Such strength in words and how to describe life and emotion.
"Still my hand tattooed your shadow
Visible even in dark,
Irrelevant is the nature,
Even snow generates the spark."
A strong ending to the outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Emilie Barn]

I really enjoyed reading the poem. It's really nice and I love the flow of it.

[Suditi]

A superb poem!
Such amazing expression of love!
I am not the biggest fan of love poems in general..but after reading your poems, i think its only the teenage love poem i have something against..
Amazing work :)

[Thea]

Everything flowed perfectly in this poem. From the idea and concept...There was so much love here...Well done!
:)))

[Cassie Fraga]

well you grasp my attention and held me through the whole thing... can really feel the depth in this write... very nice!!!

[just is]

Such an amazing write here, I really enjoyed this.
Loved the flow and rhyme scheme.

[SilentNiaAngel]

This is amazing.......... I love it=) I love the emotion and the way it flows nicely well written!

[CourtneyShay]

wow this is amazing yu captured me with the first couple of lines

[Sahar moonlight]

What a lovely poem.
The emotions conveyed in your poem are really so beautifully expressed.
I liked the description as well in your poem!