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Swaying of thoughts

Swaying of thoughts

A Poem by Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
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This is a mixture of different forms of poetry...united in one meaning.........(Senryu + Enclosed Rhyme + Tanka + Etheree + Yadu + Double Etheree + Haiku)

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(Senryu + Enclosed Rhyme + Tanka + Etheree + Yadu + Double Etheree + Haiku)

 

Instantly Detached,

Like grown up leaf of a Tree,

Incessant Flirting


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Flirting with own mind,

Dipped in sea of wonder,

Equating thunders and blunders,

Leaving constant time behind,

 

A vicious circle of imaginations,

Blending the beliefs and disbeliefs,

Calculating instantly every impossible reliefs,

Working on own selections,

 

Yet continuing like breath of life,

Even faster than heart beat,

Implausible and impossible to cheat,

Swaying naturally in sea of love and strife,


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Strife rejuvenate

Picturing absolute grief,

Instantly smiles loud,

 

Remembering an old joke,

Thousand ideas turn one,

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One,

And two,

And three and,

Four, five and six,

Superfast blending,

Flying high constantly,

Soaring on cheesy high tides,

Sudden start of athletic run,

A Dive inside sea of compassion,

Successful proposal of surprise love,


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Love, hate or soul,

Dreadful goal stuns,

Some scrolls feeble mind,

Truly blind own heart,

To find the true meaning of self thoughts,

 

Wet autumn sky,

Running high �"low,

I sighed at shore,

A last chore locks,

Fine store of unbelievable gaps,

 

From mother’s love,

To the dove’s nest,

In glove of shock,

Sudden block state,

A lock for a thought to continue new,


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New,

You,

 

Terrain,

No pain,

 

Dancing mad,

Thoughts just clad,

 

Turning insane,

Or just shear plain,

 

Randomly chosen,

Instantly frozen,

 

Like a snowfall of clicks,

Hugs of few sweet little chicks,

 

Dreadful death of hollow mind,

Delicate light makes blind,

 

Sudden darkness comes out fighting,

I am busy with my writing,

 

Travelled to UK from United States,

Instantaneously changing mates,

 

An arrow irresponsibly shattered

A Beautiful rainbow which was scattered,


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Scattered lone lightning,

Enlighten sky of frail thoughts

Twister Twist Twister.


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© 2012 Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"


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The poem is amazing. You are a talented Poet. I had to read again. I like the flow of thoughts and the places you took the reader. No weakness in the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice work here!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the flow. Your thoughts were beautiful and the poems were wonderful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely flow and imagery of thoughts. A bit emotional. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"

Delhi, Delhi, India



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