The Dream of my Nightmare

a nightmare that caused me to write something decent.

Sweating as I wake up after a couple of hours of sleep, Not shouting out since having that nightmare not squealing a peep, Afraid that the nightmare might come true, It's a regular day and i get stabbed 3 times out of the blue, With the blood rising and it gets to my throat, I'm coughing and coughing so much blood so I choke, Wounded but get to a hospital I get healthy after some days, Messed up physically and mentally you know messed up in many ways, Displeased that life can't be easy and able to fly by, With no nightmares no pain no long a*s cries, With these bags under my eyes you can see I'm ready to sleep but afraid of the screams, Staying awake for the reason that I don't want a scary dream, Losing energy since sleep is something I haven't gotten in a long time, Losing my mind and losing control ready to commit that forever undisturbed sleep with a help of a nine, Maybe getting insomnia or something GOD is trying to tell me, Sending me these secret messages like a Davinci code though he tells me he felt me, So I manage my life and live it without sleep or rest, Though becoming more cautious I start to wear a bullet proof vest, All it is my mind having a pandemic like the Red scare, It's all a shame to me it's the dream of my nightmare.

Author's Note

Well I was up at 2 in the morning and stayed up until 6 and finally went back to sleep.

Reviews

[HaruHau-Chan]

You may want to space out each line for this.
It's very interesting, but in the format it's in, it's actually very hard to tell weather this is supposed to be a poem or a story.
Perhaps you might actually want to space it out, add more details to it, and it would be a very interesting story to read.