A Dream Land

If there is a land as peaceful
As the world thats in my dreams
There must be something fragrant
In a society that reeks

I'm dreaming of blue sky's
And clear oceans that sparkle teal
I'm dreaming of a perfect world
But I choose to believe none is real

I dream of peace and laughter,
Id love for smiles to fill the air
This world doesn't exist
Or Atleast, I don't know where.

Im dreaming of a castle
Somewhere far, far away
It might not ever exist
But I'll keep dreaming everyday.

In my dreams sadness never happens
And anger never comes.
Everything is quiet and peaceful,
Except for the birds soft hums.

Dreams are the ones
That set us free from our fears.
No matter what we wish and hope;
Society will always be here.

But maybe it wont reek so bad,
If a little fragrance is what we add.

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

I will only write this once and not three times like Hussain!! : ) I Love your poem.... wondering the same and where and how to return when waking in such ruin, sometimes, is overwhelming to me. My dreams used to take me to castles and dungeons of old and now "since writing poetry about 2 years ago" they take me to the ranges and fields of France, Scotland "LOOOOVE Braemar!", and the hills of Germany. A lot of times I will feel suspended against the clouds, looking down, and then in a flash I will be involved with conversation with someone from these ares!! lol Such a peaceful poem. Beautiful.... xo -Mark

[Sibt-e-Hussain]

beautiful topic, lets put it in a way where all sorrows become a dream and feel like all your happiness a reality....!

I'm dreaming ......
......... But I choose to believe none is real

On this point i would say "you dream so real" :) Nice write-up.

[Sibt-e-Hussain]

beautiful topic, lets put it in a way where all sorrows become a dream and feel like all your happiness a reality....!

I'm dreaming ......
......... But I choose to believe none is real

On this point i would say "you dream so real" :) Nice write-up.

[Sibt-e-Hussain]

beautiful topic, lets put it in a way where all sorrows become a dream and feel like all your happiness a reality....!

I'm dreaming ......
......... But I choose to believe none is real

On this point i would say "you dream so real" :) Nice write-up.

[minisla]

Really enjoyed this write. Enlightening

[Arun.J]

Ah... nice :) :D
congrats Marissa..

[SmileBig :)]

Thanks :) wrong spelling of my name though. Lol it's one S :) but thanks :)

[Arun.J]

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