Only A Matter Of Time

Just...words coming out of my mind.

Words bounce around in my head, 

But never come completely to the surface. 

It's like, they exist...but just barely, 

Yet they still haunt my days...even when I'm half alive. 

These words can be thrown when I'm in my deepest state, 

The state of depression where I talk to no one, 

And I do nothing...I sit, like a zombie, waiting to die, 

And then the words come and attack me. I am nothing. 

I wish to the stars and the moon that I wasn't alive, 

These thoughts appear out of thin air it seems, 

And I don't want to deal with the cold anymore! 

This world is so cold, so dark! So...so completely disturbing. 

Perhaps we try along with our everlasting "love" and hearts, 

To live just one more day, and to breath a few thousand breaths. 

But my question is; why does life exist, if we just coast along? 

Why do we have to breathe? Why would we want to? 

It's a dark place here...a cool and mysterious death chamber. 

Yes, a death chamber. For we all die; thus this will be our place of death. 

Death lives within our bodies, and words lie within our minds, 

But once we put them together, it is only a matter of time. 

Reviews

[Mark Emerson]

Everyone feels the burden sometimes I know hat felling but I've also learned that we are human and make mistakes our minds are the same the fact that it takes some one only seconds to work something's out and take others minutes... I'm rambling a fault of mine I'm sorry but we all different we all work at different speeds you say that you sit like a zombie waiting it die and then words attack you... Are the words from someone you hold close to your heart or just random... I'm rambling again I'll stop here. Good peace I like it thank you

[SmileBig :)]

Thank you! Nd yea, thts true

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

nice, I think everyone has moments when they wonder why we live and if there is a point to all this

[SmileBig :)]

Thanks, and yea probably

[Admiral Kirk]

Very poetic, very deep, very... AWESOME. Great job on this one. :)

[SmileBig :)]

Thank you!

[Admiral Kirk]

No problem! :D

[♥ Kinnixk]

Whoa. I love the last two lines, it really gets the reader thinking. Wonderful write :)

[SmileBig :)]

Thank you

[♥ Kinnixk]

You're welcome :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

I love the ending and I like how the poemk is questioning. A nice write indeed

[SmileBig :)]

Thank you

[Harley (arbiter)]

Welcome, and sorry I can't write a constructive review, that's nlot in my skill base :D