The Missing Heart

I look around 

Another heart i have found, 

Foot steps treading, 

Onto a broken ground. 

As the footsteps become clearer 

I begin to hear her, 

She whispers through the air, 

Lord, you are no longer my healer. 

She trudges closer dragging feet along, 

Shes a little bit more then just a little lost 

I hear the splashes of the water, 

She screams "Now I am gone" 

Now I am gone. 

I run in her direction towards the sea, 

I scream "Oh God please don't let this be" 

She's no where to be found, 

And I fall onto my knees. 

"Please fix this broken heart, 

Give her another start, 

She can fix what she's messed up, 

Please fix her broken heart." 

I draw the cross in the sand, 

Dig my feet into the land, 

Stare out into the midnight sky, 

And then I stand. 

I hear a sound off in the distance, 

I stop and quiet, give her screams a listen. 

I run to her side, 

And find the broken heart that's been missing. 

I drag her to the land again, 

Make her breathe out and in, 

Please stay here, 

That's where you should have been. 

Reviews

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This poem is amazing and outstanding!
100/100

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Thank you :)

[kublakhan27]

I agree with what the others have said, this is a a great poem :)

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Thanks so much! :)

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You're very welcome :)

[T. Logan]

I really, really like this. I love the different fonts at the ends of some lines. That's pretty cool.

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Thank you! :D

[That1Nerd23]

Wow!! This is absolutely amazing, Missy! This is by far the best poem I have read in a very long time! Excellent job!

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Awww thank you! You just totally made my day! Thanks do much!

[That1Nerd23]

You're welcome! (:

[Megan Simpson]

Wow! This is really amazing. You should be very proud!

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Aww thank you :)

[Gazza]

Good flow, like how it developed all the way to the ending, big fan of rhyming too, I like :)

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Thanks a lot! :)

[Ian H Morrison]

very good i really enjoyed this it is very well written the flow is good and the written word is exceptional well done

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Thanks! Means a lot :)

[Ian H Morrison]

no probs any time