A whiter shade of pale

Second Best poem on this site :)

Amorous air-drawn angels

 

Wrapped within wounded wishes, within

Hovering hollow hands

Imprisoned inside

The terrible, tame,

Excessively erected

Raucously rusted reasons

 

Shapeless submerging sighs,

Hidden heavenly hues

Alas! all annulled, all ashes as

Disheartened devouring dull dreams

Erased everything

 

Oh, overflowing ominous oblivion,

Fading forever’s flower...

 

Perishable pale poems

Afloat above abundant ashen adobes

Leaving life lost, lightless,

Entrapped, embalmed, ended..

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Awed by the awesome alliteration among each line fading into the
'Whiter Shade of Pale'....lovely..

[~]

Rich in description, spare in hints, perfect puzzle to be broken.

[Matching Socks]

Enjoyed this one. What's the first pick?

[R.A. Youngblood]

Nicely penned, added to favorites. keep it up! :D

[PearlPoet]

I am glad to read your reply.. hopefully you will like my new poems as well ~hugs~

[zainul]

This is really a wonderful poem.
I enjoyed reading the lovely piece.

[PearlPoet]

Thank You Dear Poet for reading me...

[Relic]

Nice use of alliteration. This leaves me with the obvious question. What's the first best poem on the site?

[PearlPoet]

Alone by me... Thanks for the read dear Relic...