You are, I am...

You are a blazing Soul-Dance

 

rising from within the Sun,

 

upon havens' rolling dome.

 

Every eyes gaze towards your

 

clusters of graceful light

 

that softly embraces

 

thorns and petals equally,

 

spreading True Kindness

 

beyond our eyes

 

to warm the soul

 

 

And I am

 

a climbing Jasmine

 

trying to open your arms wide,

 

to drink the light from your ruby lips

 

and dissolve within the hues of your

 

sacred embrace

 

 

You are Passion's Breathe

 

that feeds the flames of love's fire,

 

that burns in the altar of universe.

 

And when you move through

 

a broken flute, that

 

lies in the dust of oblivion,

 

its ruined body once again

 

breaks into a melodious instrument,

 

stirring the air with

 

blossoming notes of joy...

 

 

and I am

 

a Poet of Immortal Love

 

trying to harvest those winged songs

 

into the basket of my heart

 

from within I pour luminous verses

 

upon the walls of your existence,

 

words after words..

 

 

Now, that I exhaled the essence of your beauty

 

I must close my lips and eyes once again,

 

And let silence turn thoughts and feelings into teardrops,

 

Until the waves of syllables erupt

 

And wash my soul ashore at your soul's coast...

Author's Note

Reviews

[PearlPoet]

This is so gorgeous my dear friend, another heavy sigh, here.
The way you connect to your readers, in amor, and happiness, almost like an euphoria through

the ink you spread... you connect, you embrace, you are a true word-smith.

There is a difference with a romantic writer, who searched out his words, and one who just felt them....

you're the last part...so definitely! what a ray of beauty here. Can't say it enough, you're talented, and I'm ever happy to be a part of your life ;) xoxo :)

- Elisa

[PearlPoet]

~~~~~~~~deep sigh~~~~~~~~ I have been trying to reply to you for 10min and all I can do is sit here and smile... I have no words to describe the feeling your reply just awoken in me.... What a beautiful Friend you are ~more sighs~ Thank you for letting me part of your life...

Awe, but so are you my friend!! your words are so beautiful, it reflect my words to you in my review :) :)

[PearlPoet]

you know, a poem can only be as beautiful as its reader.... ~soft hugs~

I'm happy you're my friend dear, and that I'm a part of your life (((HUGS))) back!

[PearlPoet]

and I just want to hug you and fly with you to the stars to play hide and seek ~big smiles~

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Now, that I exhaled the essence of your beauty



I must close my lips and eyes once again,



And let silence turn thoughts and feelings into teardrops,



Until the waves of syllables erupt



And wash my soul ashore at your soul's coast...




this was Just stunning and the music
went amazing with this piece.




Thank you for sharing this wonderful
piece.



God bless. Benita

[PearlPoet]

Thank you so much for taking the time and read me.... :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome :)

[AprilRN1210]

This is quite majestic... A heartfelt tribute to one that touches your soul and allows it to appreciate, savor, and return gift that it bestows upon the spirit in a way that it knows how. The music enhances the allure of your beautiful, enchanting words.

*on a side note*
"Every eyes gaze towards your"--- I would say.. (every eye gazes towards your)

ok, I admit.. I FELT this one.. it wasn't just pretty words painted into a lovely scene.. It dripped with emotion and sentiment... nice job.

[PearlPoet]

~deep sigh~ thank you for feeling it..

[AprilRN1210]

just being honest... if something moves me, then it does..

[PearlPoet]

Glad you are... But I must confess I failed as a writer for the essence of this poem lies within these lines:
"Every eyes gaze towards your
clusters of graceful light
that softly embraces
thorns and petals equally,"

Oh well maybe one day I will be able to say it right.. ~smiles~

[AprilRN1210]

you, honestly would say that the "essence" of this poem lies in those lines?

[PearlPoet]

Yes for I am a thorn, I am not a good man, have done so much bad things in life yet I was embraced by Her Love...

[AprilRN1210]

gotcha... :)

[Tania]

absolutely a beautiful poem . I cant stop reading it ....

[PearlPoet]

Thank you so much dear Reader for stopping by!! You just made my day/night ~smiles~

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Oh wow, this is truly an intoxicating read, that pulls you in with the sweet nectar of words you spill. I love how you alternated between the beloved and you... captivating. Although the sweet honey drip ceases in the last stanza leaving a sorrowful feeling when the magic of love ends. I do have to admit though... am still floating on the romantic charm of this piece. I adored it. Well done!

[PearlPoet]

Your comment brought me much joy sweet Reader...As you pointed out so eloquently the sweet nectar of true love did cease to drip but was my verse was trying to exhale to My Beautiful Beloved is that Her kindness was from the Heart... Immortal... for I was a thorn...

"Every eyes gaze towards your
clusters of graceful light
that softly embraces
thorns and petals equally,"

Thank you for reading it dear Kalypso ~hugs~

[Anita Singh]

Beautiful imagery. I was lost in the flow of your words. Nicely penned!

[PearlPoet]

Being lost in my words what gives me life ~smiles~ Keep on reading please.. ~hugs~

[Deuces]

What beautiful metaphor, analogy and imagery in this soul bearing piece. This flowed magnificently and had the vibe and feel of true love and appreciation for one's beauty and being. This made me think of someone I know very well... beautiful writing, indeed.

[PearlPoet]

This, and all of my writings are about true Love... Thank you for reading me

[Scott Metro]

This is really lovely....very, very pretty.
The heart floats upon the words.
Exceptional.

Scott

[PearlPoet]

Yup, I also feel that this is a great poem.. a very few poems of mine would get this praise ~smiles~
Thank you for dropping by dear Scott!

[zainul]

The whole world stopped while I read your poem.
Please remove the video,that distracts from the genuine message that emerges from the epic work.
I have no courage to isolate any part of the piece to highlight,the whole piece is engraved in my heart as a fragrant flower of love and passion.
Congratulations,Dear Friend!!!

[PearlPoet]

Thank you my dear Friend!!!! I posted the video for the music and tat tune reflects the essence of me writing this poem.... I hope you understand

[zainul]

Just take easy dear Friend!!!! I became so happy and emotional while reading the wonderful poem because it was self-explanatory.I sincerely wanted to mean that the poem itself was enough to share the full message.I understand your point .Please keep the video.Thanks for the great gesture.

[Silent Serenity also kn..]

I agree with Jacob....your words flow so smoothly

My favorite part ..........
"and I am
a Poet of Immortal Love
trying to harvest those winged songs
into the basket of my heart
from within I pour luminous verses
upon the walls of your existence,
words after words.."

A poet of immortal love....wow even through my own writings never thought of combining those words together, you have given me some new techniques to think about....

Thank you for sharing, i truly enjoyed this creation

[PearlPoet]

"A poet of immortal love." I used to believe in that you know, and the very same belief made me strive to improve my writings, to be able write a poem that my Beloved would recall sometime, somewhere and remember... me.... ~~~~~~deep sigh~~~~~ Thank you for reading me..