╰☆╮I'm in love with the exquisite vocabulary you used. This is a very good piece. Great work!╰☆╮
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank You for feeling my exhale of poetry... This was just a thought at one point and nothing more.... read moreThank You for feeling my exhale of poetry... This was just a thought at one point and nothing more...
thats why its so short....
very creative and fascinating description of a lover's embrace. Such rich language wraps around my mind and pleasantly squeezes. nice job.. wow...
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
~smiles~ Its nice to see that you felt the "hunger' I feel for the One...
"wraps around my mi.. read more~smiles~ Its nice to see that you felt the "hunger' I feel for the One...
"wraps around my mind" I was aiming for the soul.. ~hugs~
10 Years Ago
I didn't feel enough emotion--- to quite get to my soul... but for the reasons stated above you did .. read moreI didn't feel enough emotion--- to quite get to my soul... but for the reasons stated above you did capture the attention of my mind:)
10 Years Ago
Well if you would read all of my poems then you would feel it maybe... This verse is just a thought .. read moreWell if you would read all of my poems then you would feel it maybe... This verse is just a thought penned down... Still I love that you dropped by ~soft hugs~
I tell you what, give me the name of one of your works where the intent is to MOVE the reader emotio.. read moreI tell you what, give me the name of one of your works where the intent is to MOVE the reader emotionally. I shall read and we will see if you do just that... :)
10 Years Ago
~smiles~ Alone would be one of them... wouldnt you you say so?
10 Years Ago
you give me one I have already read and gave you my thoughts, so you already know the answer to this.. read moreyou give me one I have already read and gave you my thoughts, so you already know the answer to this:)
This was beautiful:) and very romantic. You did divine with it PearlPoet:)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
~~~~~~~~~deep sigh~~~~~~~~~~ Thank You dear Poet!!!!
10 Years Ago
Your welcome
It's Kingdom poetry alike almost, with your coblat-blue heartbeats... blue blood, pumping there through your veins, could be very through looking back to your roots ;) this was so utterly beautiful, romantic, and a heavy sigh from my part... I really felt the haunting beauty of it, the reaching out to touch your beloved... beautiful stuff my dear friend :) (((HUGS)))
- Elisa
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
"blue blood" How did you know????? Love you Dear Friend! Oh and thank you for your words, I will emb.. read more"blue blood" How did you know????? Love you Dear Friend! Oh and thank you for your words, I will embrace them in my heart
11 Years Ago
LOL, maybe cuz I wear some blue blood too lol, from out of my far behind heritage.... from Austria h.. read moreLOL, maybe cuz I wear some blue blood too lol, from out of my far behind heritage.... from Austria ha! you're welcome dear friend... (HUGS) x
11 Years Ago
You know, my first Ancestor, who was a priest, was burned alive for translating Latin, Greek and Heb.. read moreYou know, my first Ancestor, who was a priest, was burned alive for translating Latin, Greek and Hebrew religious texts in 300 AD...
11 Years Ago
Now that's fascinating, and your wonderful family reaches that far back in prove... :D
11 Years Ago
I have came to realize; It doesn't matter where you from but where you at! :)
I can feel the embrace from the distant land
Its grace charmed my heart like sweet band
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you dear Friend for stopping by... glad to know that you have felt this verse...
11 Years Ago
You are most welcome Dear Friend.:)
Every opportunity to stop at your station is a great pleas.. read moreYou are most welcome Dear Friend.:)
Every opportunity to stop at your station is a great pleasure of mine.