Lost it...
A Poem by John Holmes
I am actually kinda pissed, I wrote a poem venting amd MMy internet crashed so I lost it.
Anyway this is how I felt after/
I was in a bad mood anyway, now I am... well...
I already wrote a poem. I lost it. it is gone
Now all I am left with is empty words of an empty soul I have nothing left to give I am gone Broken.
Let me go. I have lost myself. I am nothing but worthless ash in this God forsaken Heaven.
© 2014 John Holmes
Author's Note
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I couldn't care.
I am that unhappy.
Say what you will.
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This happens to me quite often. I am halfway through a poem and then I am called away or interrupted and then I lose my train of thought. Urgh.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
The worst thing is I wrote it to vent (not feeling so good), clicked publish and my internet died..... read moreThe worst thing is I wrote it to vent (not feeling so good), clicked publish and my internet died.... absolutely pissed! Thanks for the friend request btw, have been quite on here lately so it came as a nice surprise. xx
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11 Years Ago
You're welcome, I have only joined today so I have been looking for some nice people to befriend :)
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11 Years Ago
awwwww Thank you! well please feel free to review some more of my work, or just read it! Can i rec.. read moreawwwww Thank you! well please feel free to review some more of my work, or just read it! Can i recommend Pied Piper? I will start reviewing your work tomorrow, when I am in a better state of mind. feel free to message me Sarah :) xx
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11 Years Ago
Thank you! I will read through some more of your work tomorrow as I am off for tonight, toodles m'de.. read moreThank you! I will read through some more of your work tomorrow as I am off for tonight, toodles m'dear! :)
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11 Years Ago
"train of thought" sarah is too much like a train.......it blows it's whistle to let you know it's c.. read more"train of thought" sarah is too much like a train.......it blows it's whistle to let you know it's coming.
i like your poetic structure when you break free of hackneyed tradition.(colossus) i thought
about that poem all afternoon......dana
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Added on July 5, 2013
Last Updated on June 21, 2014
Tags: sad, alone, depressed, pathetic, lonley, stupid, moron, lost, broken, exhausted, women, relationships, love, people, poem, poetry
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John HolmesUnited Kingdom
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Okay SO I am back everybody! Sorry for the long lapse in maintaining this account. I hope you're all well. Currently I stand at zero read requests, I came back to have far too many for me to ever catc.. more..
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